November 22, 2011

Ribbon Fish

Mouths Of
Teeth
Sharp
Mean

In the deep
Holes
Sliding
Around

Slithering
Silver
Streaks

Thai
Fish
Mush

Vietnamese
Soup

Fish
Eel
Mirror
Mystery
Snakes

6 comments:

Keith said...

Personally, I like this post but will not click "like" on my own posts.

Keith said...

Just read this again, probably for the 40th time.

Keith said...

I think I keep coming back to this because as a kid I was entranced by those crazy deep sea fish with the teeth, dangling glowing bait balls on the head and luminous bodies etc. Sea creatures are really interesting.

Keith said...

It's that and the mix of words with the repetition of 'eee' (teeth,mean,deep,streaks,vietnameeese,eel,mystery) and 'm's mixed with 's's (mouths, mean, mush, mirror, mystery... sharp, sliding, slithering, silver, streaks, soup, snakes) and something else that I can't put my finger on.

Keith said...

These guys are like aliens to me. I think they make my imagination run. Ribbon fish. There's so much that makes my imagination run. I'm a nut.

Keith said...

I keep coming back to this post. I've read it 50-60 times. I read it to Kovi last night. What a wicked shiny creature.